Let me tell about my unforgettable holiday. Last summer vacation, I went to xxxxx with my best friend. We were flight form Bei Jing to xxxx for 12 hours, then we have arrived. In Australia, although the largest city is Sydney, but Sydney is a commercial city, xxxxx is a historical and cultural city. I remember the most interested place we went where the Royal Botanic Gardens . It is the one of the best botanical gardens in the world and there were more than 30,000 species of plants over there. It's so cool . Come to xxxxx, it will make you relaxed!
A lovely description Kevin and it sounds like a great holiday. This is a wild guess - was it Melbourne?
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'Last summer vacation, I went to xxxxx..' - Last summer i went to xxxx on holiday..with my best friend.
'..were flight..' we were ON the flight...
form - FROM Beijing
'then we have arrived' - TENSE then we arrived
'although the largest city is Sydney, but Sydney is a commercial city, xxxxx is a historical and cultural city.' - NOT altough AND but - although the largest city is Sydney, it is a commercial city, whereas xxx is ....(Use 'WHEREAS' to show contrast)
'most interested' - most interestING