About six years ago I went to Amenrica with my friends.It took 8 hours from my country ShangHai to USA.This was my first time go abroad and also my first time by air,so i was very excited for this journey.Oh,the best thing of this journey is freedom, nobody can make me change idea to do anything, i can do anything that i want. Such as :buy a new kind styer MP3 player.Nobody can stop me!How comfortable it was.Of course! There was also some problems, no mother and father, just friends that the same age with me,we just 10 years old,we were so young that many thing we don't know how to deal with,may be we will lose in airport or miss the airplane and so on.Anything should be decided by ourself,no one will give us hand.It's the time that needed spent almost all of the knowledge that we have studied.
Wow Alvin, that is a very young age to travel without your parents!
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..'excited ABOUT this journey.'
verb agreement:
'There was some problems..' - There WERE some problems.
'..maybe we will lose..' - maybe WE WILL GET LOST.. (TO GET LOST means to lose yourself)